• I have written "Your Mom" in my ideas notebook... seriously... I have. 

  • DafterThings “your mom” jokes are tight lol

  •  Really freaking good! I don't know if you want feedback, but I'll just do like my mother in law and blurt it out. Maybe turn up the screewriter's dialogue. Outstanding though. Really. 

  • I enjoyed that. Gave you a vote. Everyone can vote for up to 10 different shorts, yours is my fourth.


  • Kiplake Thank you! 

    Yeah the screenwriter’s dialogue and the ending was a last minute change I did. I had different ending written but plans changed due to conflicting schedules :/  

    thanks, again, for giving it a watch :) 

  • AramM Thank you! Means a lot :) 

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