Not sure we really got across the 'cold' at the end. Probably could have put a cold filter or masked it better rather than a simple light blue plane with opacity. The Thought Bubble effect was more difficult than we expected. Layers of composite shots to 'bake' the removal of different elements.... and we didn't name them all well enough which caused more confusion than it should have (1001st lesson learnt).
More things we're not sure of...
a) Is it obvious why Phoebe shuts and locks the door? We got caught whether the motive would be doing as she was told or revenge. We included both.
e.g. using one as the opportunity to do the other . Did that come across?
b) The Thought Bubble is a clip from a previous video with a link in the description. We had a difference of opinion on what to do. Leave it open or make it more obvious by adding the link. Any suggestions?