Mad Mike (1st Sep 2010 13:15)

Well I have listened to all comments and taken them in. I think my biggest problem was yes I had a story and wanted to make a whole blown movie as my first attempt. Instead I have decided to do a web series instead with 5 to ten minute episode so that way I concentrate on the scenes needed more. I do have a story to tell its a bit daft of me that i didn't. its already been told in written form and I dont think theres anywhere to post it here. After much thought ive decided to tell the story slighly differently for film and hopefully the first episode which does tell a story wil get a better response. I have taken on board the comments and agree completely. So here's hoping my second attempt isn't such a disaster which i admit it was. And hopefully I can overcome my grading problems. But I'm sure you guys will tell me if I don't. thankyou all for your comments and advice.

Tarn (1st Sep 2010 12:46)

Regarding the grading, part of the problem is that each shot seems to have a completely different visual style. This is what makes the trailer feel like a collection of unconnected shots. Even if they're from different scenes in the film there should still be a general overall style that binds everything together..

Mad Mike (31st Aug 2010 10:47)

Points taken, but how do you mean strange grading. They were set garding from visionlab. Myabe the fxhome cinema wasnt the best place to put the clip as your right it was just anh assortment of odd clips but was for some volunteers to show how they had been cloned etc and while they enjoyed it. I admit its pretty crap but i can also see where i have developed.