VisionFilmmaker (26th May 2010 22:11)
Sollthar wrote:
There's some nice work in there. Mainly though, there's two problems I had: 1 - the quality of the footage. It looked like your standard DV footage shot without attention to light or composition. The shots looked rather weak. 2 - Coherence. There were about 10 different styles thrown at me, which I do find a bit confusing in a video. It leaves the impression of an "experiment" rather then the feeling that the entire video is one entity. The title work itself was rather nice however!
Thanks for the feedback
1. I'm sorry about the footage the teacher who was in charge of the talent show only let me film in cafeteria where the lighting wasnt too good
2. I had all the different styles because each contestant wanted me to do something different for all of them so i think i did
But yes you are right that this was a experiment for me because i have only worked with Affer effects 2 times, but i am thankful for your feedback and hope that my next movie is better
JOfxmuschst (24th May 2010 14:47)
This was pretty good. I like the effect when the picture stops and the text appaers. I guess this was a lot of hard work. Good job overall. (3/5)
Sollthar (24th May 2010 07:29)
There's some nice work in there. Mainly though, there's two problems I had:
1 - the quality of the footage. It looked like your standard DV footage shot without attention to light or composition. The shots looked rather weak.
2 - Coherence. There were about 10 different styles thrown at me, which I do find a bit confusing in a video. It leaves the impression of an "experiment" rather then the feeling that the entire video is one entity.
The title work itself was rather nice however!