Tarn (4th Jan 2010 12:08)
Indeed, a good story can get past less good technicals. But great technicals are useless against a crap story (see: Pirates of the Carribean sequels).
Having said that, one of the best ways to enhance a story is to also get your technicals right. 
Jabooza (2nd Jan 2010 22:29)
Thanks for the comments, glad most of you liked it.
Atom wrote:
There is truth that invoking an emotion can come from many things and be the dominant carrier for the weight of a narrative (instead of the technical quality, I mean)- but you
cannot and
should not discount the values and necessity of proper lighting and editing and other fundamental cornerstones of
filmmaking like those.
Yeah, I agree. For me, telling the story and focussing on emotions is definitely more important than the technicals are, but the technicals are still extremely important and should never be disregarded just because the story is what matters more. I do think the story matters more, but technicals still matter a lot.
Sollthar (28th Dec 2009 09:04)
Just wanted to add that I showed your short to a couple of mates and they were all scared to death and very impressed with what good soundwork and a clear narrative can do. Was fun watching them, especially towards the end. 