Sollthar (16th Oct 2009 12:59)

Sorry, but there's pretty much everything wrong with this. A muzzle only lasts about a single frame, first of all, so shorten your effects. Also, you really don't need any credits if you're just going to show off a test you did. The music was really distracting too. If it was the muzzle you were trying out, then focus on that. Don't try to make your test appear like a "film" by adding credits and dodgy music, just upload the effect you want to do. The smoke was better then the muzzle, but appeared to be out of track somehow. Good luck experimenting further.