NovaProducteur (11th Oct 2009 09:11)

I like this trailer, and frankly for a trailer he is good because I seen lot of trailer, just because it it's a trailer it looks like nothing but i can already located the story (where, when .. .) but it's true the title is a bit long, you have right enjoyed your studio as I do my production ... But 5 or 7 seconds would be better !

spydurhank (11th Oct 2009 08:12)

Don't take this the wrong way but well... You have a 39 second trailer but 20 seconds of that trailer is all title shots, which leaves you with only 19 seconds worth of actual footage for the trailer. So your trailer is pretty much cut in half. Really? This is not meant to be negative in an way... it's just something that you may want to look into for future reference. 20 seconds worth of titles in a trailer that is only 39 seconds long... that's way too much dead air that you can use on showing us more of your footage. So either add more footage to the trailer... if you have any that is. or cut the length of the title sequence on the trailer that you already have so that there is not so much dead air. So when you're the one that's doing all the work... filming, directing, adding visual effects and all that jive... you really have to scrutinize yourself and think about what you're doing because a lot of folks make the same mistake. They think that there's nothing wrong with there first draft. WRONG! You have to go back and look at it over and over as many times as it takes... never half-ass it dude, or your work will never be as good as it should be. I can't read your mind so I'm only guessing that you only had 19 seconds worth of footage because you may or may have not wanted to reveal too much about your movie in the trailer... am I wrong or right on that? Either way... there's nothing wrong with that... aside from the fact that you spent way too much time showing us absolutely nothing rather than showing us something that should hold our attention long enough for us to want to watch the actual movie. You have to realize that the editing style which you use in your trailer, it speaks volumes about what we as an audience might expect should we even consider to watch your movie. Anyway... that was just my two cents on the subject but I wouldn't mind seeing some more of your movie. The title "Soldier" is what originaly made me watch your trailer.

C92094 (11th Oct 2009 03:10)

good, you fixed it