C92094 (13th Sep 2009 01:00)
I agreee with all you guy's comments, But it's time for a little explanation, first of all, I didn't even direct this movie, my little brother did all of it. Second, I just started using a new Video editor and had no Idea what it could do, Third, I had never done anything but gun effects before, (note- this vid is almost a year old)
FXhomerTony (12th Sep 2009 16:32)
Not bad for starters. My early work didn't look much better. I suggest more use of close ups for reactions- tighter editing- and more time with your special effects.
All this set aside, I think you are on the right track and show great enthusiasm for your work.
Keep working at it, and learn from each one of your projects- I feel you will do very well. Good Luck- look forward to seeing more!
Pasketi (12th Sep 2009 10:14)
Fudge Dog wrote:
It's of not brilliant special effects though.
Agreed. The other eye is not the whole time over the actual eye in the beginning, eye-beam should be more realistic, and if you try to kill someone by shooting him, you should check sometimes if he's dead already (not too much shooting, your watchers go deaf...)
About the snowing... there is no snow on the land. You should've done this at winter, so you'd get real snowing. Also it shouldn't snow inside.
Just make little changes, and it might be good. What there is better than in my videos... Using the camera (not only tripod) and probably the actor-count. (my crew is usually about 2 guys on screen and no other crew-members)
Keep it up! I hope to see better effects in your next video
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