Pasketi (6th May 2009 05:42)

I actually wanted this out before we left to rome with my family.... I just don't like doing lightsabers, because it's so time-consuming... Sorry 'bout the camerawork, but my friends are not so much into the movies, so i have to use just tripod, because mainly we got only 2 guys doing these films (Or even 1 ^^)... I'm also sorry about the lacking storyline (still), but I have so bad english spelling, that i like to speak english only when i have to, or when i feel to do so (check the only video, where i speak english at my website, movies and tutorials). I wouldn't like to submit here movies, where we speak Finnish... I'd like to do so, but that just doesn't feel right... And mainly I'm bored! This is (after playing games, that bore me faster) the only way to keep me happy on my free-time. Games that i play and reason why i don't play them FoF: Mainly 2-3 songs, then I'm bored 9Dragons: Doesn't run on my mac and my PC just sucks (sad....) TrackMania: Doesn't run on my mac and my PC just sucks (sad....) Chronicles of spellborn: Copy-Paste You got the point... So thank you for critics, but i ask you to not make me stop doing what i do best (even though that made me try harder ) -Pasketi P.S. You don't like my Black lightsaber?? (my because i did it i'm actually the other one)

Sollthar (5th May 2009 16:14)

It's a shame really you put 8 days into effects and so little time into everything else. I stopped watching after about half way through. Before you spend so much time on doing effects onto something, I'd really recommend you to put some effort into other production sides. Think up a story, first of all. And even if you're just going for a "2 random guys randomly fight each other in a random way" movie like this, don't forget film is not just about adding effects, it's about atmosphere, camerawork, proper editing, sound in order to tell a story. And even an action scene should tell a story, just through action. This has backlight, weird editing, the oddest looking lightsaber I've seen yet, rushed editing and almost no choreography worthwhile. Honestly, rather spend 8 days PLANNING your little film next time. That's time much better spend, I promise!