Mar Omega (24th Jun 2009 14:52)
I like your physical effects, props and locations on both parts. Your camerawork was pretty good, and I like the fact that you use cutaway shots.
As for the digital effects, they could use some work across the board. Play with the settings a little more and try to blend the effects in better. You did use the right effects in the right places. You even used some subtleties that most people would miss. They just all need some tweaks. This movie seems like a 75% finished animatic.
FXhome products are decent out of the box, but the point is to push them and trim them to fit your movie. I hope to see you put that extra TLC into it and forge this into a master work.
FXhomer61219 (2nd Jun 2009 20:43)
Guys thats so much for the feed back - it was our first film so, agreed, we had some errors and plenty of work to be done. We've taken on board all the commnets though and hope our next outing will be better. Its a shame as I can get FXhome to post the first half!
Hopefully the story line is better explained when the two parts are watched back to back. I am trying to get the first bit on FXhome site but in the meantime these are the youtube links to both parts:-
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rMQ9sTkOuGs PART ONE
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bmoFfbH8sxM&feature=related PART TWO
Thanks agin chaps!!