clement (4th Mar 2009 02:22)

alright thanks alot for the criticism, il remember the further shots, color grading, and audio in the future. once again, thanks

The Nemesis2161 (3rd Mar 2009 15:53)

by-the-way, it all depends on the look your going for, how do I know if the finished film isn't/wasn't your dream? I don't, this is just my opinion, and I can see why you would want it to be gritty, and stuff, but the audio, you should definately dub.

The Nemesis2161 (1st Mar 2009 06:31)

Well first, try to color grade (I didnt notice any) That is one giant way to improve. also, dont be afraid to get a long shot from the top of a house, the #1 way to tell if a film is low-budget or amatuer is if there is no long shot. Also, just do practice, shoot some 10 second tests and expierment with color grading and light affects (I also use a lot of glows). By doing lots of tests you'll eventually develop skills and personal expierence over time that you can use to make your films better (looking). Also, try (if you have time) dubbing over your films (in the future), this is another way to upgrade your films qualities. PS I said I didnt like the cinematography mainly because this is the FX Home site, home of the easiest way to make your cheap movies look like hollywood.