The Guy With A Camcorder (5th Jun 2009 17:36)

I'm sorry, but this really stinks. I can kind of tell that not much effort was put into the making of this.

b4uask30male (31st Dec 2008 11:12)

The titles we bad sorry but that the first thing people see, spend a little time on them or as i've had to do in the past and ask for help on here to create titles. The first two shots are not well framed, one shot we see the side of someones head and the other person we see the back of his head, always remember you know who you are, we don't!!! So you need establishing shots, clear shots of the people in the film for the viewers to get to know who is there. Spend some time on doing a 2nd camera angle of the same scene and also try to use the camera better, one such shot two guys on th floor and the camera is way up on the tripod, the camera needed to be at their level, always remember the viewer doesn't want to see the tops of people's head. Other than that well done, great fun.