StumpMovieMan (27th Aug 2008 19:12)

I echo the thoughts shared here. I mean, its kind of a cool idea, but I feel like it doesn't really do much to actually "tease" the movie. Also, I feel like maybe their should be a grading difference between the shots of the city with people and the shots of the city deserted. Anyway...

Phileep (12th Aug 2008 19:55)

Thanks for the feedback Zephlon. Yeah you're right about it not explainging alot. maybe my description wasn't the best, but part of the film is that the human race is practically non existant. Please remember that the film hasn't actually been filmed yet and that this was more of a test to see what the film would look like so to speak. And again you're right about the 'booms' not being in time with the music however I did this to emphasise that everyones lives are busy and different, if that makes any sense? but when the music changes you'll notice the 'booms' are more in time, suggesting that people's lives aren't as busy and that everything is more calm. Thanks again for the feedback, much appreciated!

Zephlon (12th Aug 2008 01:01)

Well the trailer really doesn't explain the movie at all. unless this movie is a documentary about a city, then it would work, but from what you described that's not what it is about....is it? The footage was nice...some shots not on a tripod should have been. The grading was nice and the framing was decent. Biggest problems is that your "Booms" where not on beat with the background song and sounded very secondary. Good luck with the film