this is only part one of my movie, i will not be posting the rest of the movie parts until it's completely finished. By the way this is my first movie I've actually attempted to make good so please be understanding.
I'm really not a fan of people who post loads of clips when in fact they could be edited together simply. That's just me though.
Good luck though and keep up the good work.
this is my first movie I've actually attempted to make good
It shows. Good job. There is effort into this.
My biggest recommendation would simply be not to look at the camera. So start with working on this, what b3n said and what Zephlon said, and you're getting there.
I actually liked the colour/grading/exposure a lot. It looked as though it was really dark, which is what you were obviously going for.
Oh, and one more thing... Who the heck goes to bed with their shoes on?
Plainly
this is only part one of my movie, i will not be posting the rest of the movie parts until it's completely finished. By the way this is my first movie I've actually attempted to make good so please be understanding.
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There is effort into this.
My biggest recommendation would simply be not to look at the camera. So start with working on this, what b3n said and what Zephlon said, and you're getting there.
I actually liked the colour/grading/exposure a lot. It looked as though it was really dark, which is what you were obviously going for.
Oh, and one more thing... Who the heck goes to bed with their shoes on? 
Plainly
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