Plainly (19th May 2008 17:32)
OK! So the trailer starts off with FXhome's and your logo. You put a nice sound effect over the FXhome logo; the sounds of the helicopter in your logo I'd have taken off for the trailer, and made much shorter (the logo itself, not the sound) but it's no big deal.
Then, we get some black and the music starts off. Nice music. Nice use of black. Kudos.
Then, you show us a sky with a flying thing flying towards us (thesaurus, anyone?). I like that.
Then the running soldier. Nice animation. I'm assuming, though, that nothing was actually modelled by you, but you took them off the Internet, which I think takes a lot away.
Then we see some well done fighting, etc, etc, and the trailer ends.
Good job!