jfreedan (11th May 2008 15:17)

Yeah, I had every intention to animation the smoke more but I didn't have enough time. This was a major rush job, unfortunately. Also, if anyone is interested in how some of the effects were made, I have a short demo about it here, http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UkuKzp9Hw_s Although it uses the trailer I made as an example, the same principles apply to the short film.

Plainly (10th May 2008 01:42)

Just a quick note about the CG ambiant smoke: To make it look as though it actually is present in the room, you should make it move with the objects, not stay put in front of the camera. (EDIT: I understand that you had time constraints - this is just a tip for future projects. ) Anyway, appart from that, it was pretty good. I liked the atmosphere. Nice idea to make everything black and white except for the girl's lips. It did drag at some points, though. Plainly