Plainly (8th May 2008 22:47)

Yes, I'll agree with the music, it was very good! Maybe got a bit tiring after a while, but not big deal. So. Well done! This was, as previously said, very enjoyable. Your editing was generally very, very good (only the running scenes, as Zephlon said. For example, 5:04 in the 2nd part, we get some really nice shots of the guy going down the stairs, but the last one of him still going down is rather unnecessary. That's the 5:09 one. Appart from that, though, that sequence was great). I also really like the camerawork, sometimes a bit 'busy' (whole office scene around 2:00-2:45 [1st part], a lot of zooming going on, just a bit overdone. All the others scenes were great, though.). The acting was generally great, too. It did seem a bit scripted in the 4:30 conversation (2nd part, again), but it's really the only time I noticed anything not awesome about the acting ). Anyway, my two favourite shots are 4:52 (second part), great music, angle, grading, etc... And 5:00 in the first part. Grading, sound, actor's expression, editing, all very well done. So before I bore you, I'll just conclude by giving you a 5/5, spot somewhere in my top ten, and finally, signing, Plainly

Zephlon (7th May 2008 01:07)

very entertaining to watch. Only a few points to hit on. Your grading was very nice, but a few areas looked like they weren't graded at all. Not a big Issues, but something to look for in your next film. The biggest issue for me was the running scenes. they seemed very slow, some faster cutting, and some faster running might benefit you. It just seemed as though your actors where jogging not running. Also the throwing the baby stroller in front of the other guys just seemed really cliche, and almost funny because it was a wide alley way, and such a small baby carriage. Your dialogue was very well done, seemed like good scripting, the only complaint for me was that the actors lacked pronunciation, so I couldn't hear a lot of what they where saying. but it could just be your accents. Along with sound, it would have been nice if you added in some gun sounds. like when you cock the gun, get a big heavy "metal slamming metal" sound so they sound real. Same for when you un-holster the gun, have a metal sound for it. Hearing the plastic airsoft sound kinda takes you out of the movie Props on the music. Credits said you composed it? very good job, it fit the movie well. way good job guys 4/5 keep up the good work