The Flying Fox (8th Apr 2008 18:11)

Hi, Nice to see you enjoying the package, the muzzle flash itself was good, if perhaps slightly too small, just a bit. I think to improve it you could add reactive lighting, so either get a lamp and flick it on and off repeatedly, or if you have proper lighting equiptment use that. You could also do this digitally, but as you shot is very dark (assuming that thats not part of the grading) I wouldn't go for that option, however there's a tutorial here. I think that using reactiv elighting would really add to the effect especially when you do the close up shot. Sound was good, and worked well, smoke didn't composite too well with the dark background, I'm not sure if it's particles or stock footage. As there's no actual story, and the effects could be improved, I'd give you 2/5. Hope to see more. Tim

The Nemesis2161 (8th Apr 2008 15:07)

Nice, I enjoyed it, m brother made a move like this with Visionlab.