Plainly (31st Jan 2008 19:55)

Hum... OK. First, I like your camera work. I think you had quite some noticeably nice angles. Second, the music was overdramatic at some points, and third, it didn't always follow the story (at 3:09, for example - it DID get softer, but just not enough, IMO). Fourth, many of your muzzle flashes were transparant-looking, which would probably be because they didn't last long enough. Fifth, you had no real introduction, and thus, no real story. However, you did have a nice little conclusion (but the music was a bit overdramatic). The acting wasn't great, either. It may be true that they held the guns correctly - what do I know? - but other than that... The main character's actor and his father's actors were good, though. It's just the way the extras all died exactly the same that's strange and unrealistic. Anyways, all of this to help you with future projects. Plainly

drspin98 (31st Jan 2008 04:02)

So, this video is NOT connected with your church? Thanks for clearing that up.

Loco Studios (20th Jan 2008 23:35)

I Like The Music