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A short film made for "The Holiday Movie Marathon" which shows the dangers of driving on icy roads

A young man goes to work a night shift only to be in a dramatic car accident.

Its nothing special I know and it does drag on during the middle, but it gets the point across.

Feedback appreciated.

 

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Phileep (31st Jan 2008 08:37)

drspin98 wrote:
Nice job. I LOVED when the shot of you entering the room having just woken up and it starts out out of focus then comes into focus-nice! I would have cut a handful of frames off of nearly every clip to make the editing just a bit tighter (it was perfect when you closed the breadbox door @ 1:37). A different use of music right before/when the crash happened might have made that a bit more dramatic. But that's just me. Nice work. What editing software did you use?
Thanks for feedback, given more time i could of perfected this, making the edit a bit tighter, and cutting clips down etc. But becuase i was on a time schedule, i couldn't. I used sony vegas for the editing.

 

drspin98 (29th Jan 2008 14:19)

Nice job. I LOVED when the shot of you entering the room having just woken up and it starts out out of focus then comes into focus-nice! I would have cut a handful of frames off of nearly every clip to make the editing just a bit tighter (it was perfect when you closed the breadbox door @ 1:37). A different use of music right before/when the crash happened might have made that a bit more dramatic. But that's just me. Nice work. What editing software did you use?

 

The Strider (28th Jan 2008 00:31)

I enjoyed this film. The only flaws were the dragging pace throughout, the really drowsy tone (though that can be used effectively), and not much of a hook to grab my interest. Other than that, good job.