markjeppo (10th May 2008 20:57)

Some stylish shots & the voice-over was perfect for lulling me into false sense of security. You did very well with the twist at the end. My only criticism would be a technical one about the sound - cheap mic, no pop filter = not great results. This is a shame because the voice over was really VERY good. You don't have to spend a lot of money for a decent mic & it will make a major difference. When it comes to film the ear is less forgiving than the eye.

smoorns (18th Dec 2007 15:38)

hey, thanks for all the great feedback you guys have given. I know the audio is a letdown as I didn't use a great mic but that will be rectified in the new short which I am scripting at the minute. Thanks again for taking the time to comment on my little movie

davlin (17th Dec 2007 16:45)

Stephen this is an outstanding short film,one of the best I've seen .This is an original piece beautifully filmed with an incredible voice over which played such an important part of the package. You have a great talent ,keep up the great work. Excellent 5/5