Tru Jones (5th Nov 2007 15:03)

thank you so much for the comment, you dont know how much appreciated i am to hee comments and to see my movie on the (today's top 10). im work on the deficiencies as we speak on my next movie. thank you again and spread my movie out i want more comments to get my head in the right place for a perfect movie.

Knightsong (4th Nov 2007 23:07)

Perhaps, if you have the editing software for it, you could add a prologue to set up your story. I assume this is going to be a serial set of movies with this being the first part. On another note maybe tone down the music a hair and the sound effects, they seemed a bit loud and a little distracting. I did like what you were doing in the fight and for a first movie you did pretty well in your attempts to pull off a movie style fight scene. Keep working on it, you'll only get better.