Penguin (15th Sep 2007 14:02)

It's a disgrace to the white stripes to put them in this trailer... Well, just kidding, but the music doesn't fit at all and the effects are sub-standard. Not very good in my oppinion, but you have to start somewhere I guess, and I will take into consideration that you are 12, and that actually wasn't as bad as the stuff I was making 3 years ago, so I'll give it a 2 for the effort you put into it.

Videoace123 (5th Aug 2007 20:11)

Thank you for your comments. This movie is an action comedy, so it's serious, but it has some very funny parts in script. I will have the actors where better costumes, so thank you for that advice. Be sure to watch the final movie, Videoace

King of Blades (5th Aug 2007 04:35)

Well, Mellifluous pretty much said it all there. The costumes were mediocre, the muzzle flashes didn't correspond to the weapons, the head lock was way too bloody to be realistic, and the camera work needs improvement. Also as Mellifluous said, I don't know if this is meant to be a comedy, but you may need to work on it a bit more to be taken seriously. Now, to get some better-quality costumes, you could get darker clothes, and put some non-stain blood on it (but that is an area that I won't be much help in). You could also try to rip up and try to get the clothes/costumes very dirty; if you are using white shirts, put the shirt underneath a car or truck, and run it over; you would then have some tire tread marks on it (but make sure that that particular shirt isn't your only one). For the muzzle flashes, just use the generic muzzle flash that you can use in EffectsLab. And as for the bloody head-lock, it would be best just to remove the blood effects. And for the camera work, like Mellifluous said, purchase (or use) a tripod, and get some steadier shots-- the camera work was way too shaky.