owen rixon (20th Nov 2006 16:39)

Yea the writing was the best I could do at the time. My next film which I'm doing at the moment is going to be much more complete and the whole thing will be narated by the lead character. Thanks for the comments everyone.

CTLW83 (20th Nov 2006 13:43)

I agree with Sollthar, the text kind of detracted from the film. I wonder if there would be a more effective way of getting the message across next time. I liked the creative use of materials and the fact that you were able to do some pretty steady panning in some of the shots. Things like that are pretty hard to do effectively without motion control setups. Animation was good, and I liked the story as well.

ferral (18th Nov 2006 04:49)

Owen I really enjoyed this! It's briming with character and charm. Bravo! : )