ajjax44 (3rd May 2006 06:23)

All valid points. Film would have benefited from them back when it was made. Luckily, I have learned a tremendous amount since then and continue to learn with each project I do. Thanks for the comments though. Here are the answers. Ms. White was the one who called him. I didn't think it was important what she said which is why you don't hear it. Dude didn't own a tie...what can I say? ha...for a class...I think the excuse I had in my head was that they had already been in in there for a few hours before the first time you see them and it was hot and tiring. Maybe at some point the guy might have taken off the tie for comfort's sake? AJ

Zephlon (2nd May 2006 22:08)

It was an interesting plot, but where did the second phone call to the detective come from, and why did one detective have and untied tie and one didn’t even have one. From what I know detectives always have to keep dressed nicely, kind of like a military uniform. The gun effects where ok, the music was good, but still the plot was nice, and there where a few good angles 4/5