King of Blades (29th May 2006 02:32)
Alright, this movie needs something else than just a saber duel. I mean, like someone else said that you can do something else with your skills. And with the opening "scene", it could be a bit better than just a mere CGI environment and character; do you not live in a house with a backyard? Do some actual acting, man! But the duel overall was pretty good:)
Seargent (26th Feb 2006 03:47)
I saw where you were going with this. It was a good first attempt.
The greenscreening was ok, but the places just seemed kinda small. Also there were too many uneeded spins. But I know some things that can help you choreagraph your duels
Got to http://www.theforce.net/fanfilms/production/tumble_tutorial/index.asp
to help with your duels.
Hope this helps. Keep at it.