nfsbuff (21st Feb 2006 08:06)

Thankyou J Mijares, your comments were appreciated.

J Mijares (20th Feb 2006 20:23)

Wow, this was exceptionally well made. The effects were done extremely well and you captured the frenzy of battle with deft camera work. Also, it was an excellent choice to tell the story entirely through visuals, as opposed to having a lot of expository dialogue. I think the only thing lacking for me was how the relationship was shown. I don't think you have to go as far as to show sex, because it's already implied, but there was no romantic tension between the husband and wife. The closest form of affection between them was a friendly hug. I understand that some actors won't kiss on screen, but even holding hands and looking at each other implies a much stronger relationship than two people hugging. Use of Effects Lab is definitely a 5. But for story, I'd have to give an overall 4. Still, this was very well made.

FXhomer8264 (17th Jan 2006 07:53)

Yes. Well said. This was a successful project for us beginners, on our way to becoming better filmmakers.