Lithium Kraft (30th Oct 2005 15:34)

Ok, I'll try to be honest here. 1.5 and 2.5 weren't great, but they weren't bad. It reminds me of this other movie on FXHome where these two guys are fighting but 2 and a half out of the 3 minutes of the movie are just the guys hiding behind trees. Demo 1 was much MUCH better than the other two, although the effects seemed rushed (you need to tone up the contrast on the clips you overlayed in the dumpster scene, turning up the contrast darkens the lights). But overall I guess 1.5 and 2.5 were 1's, but Demo 1 was more deserving of a 3 (you portrayed the fact that there were only 3-4 actors but used masking and split screening to make it look like there were more, good job on that). Overall, normally I'd say a 2 or something, but you put good effort, so I'll generously bump that up to a 3. Look forward to seeing other projects of yours!

AAAx2 (28th Oct 2005 15:50)

Thanks for the feedback. Rudy- I dont have final cut pro or any fancy editing software so I dont think I can edit the sound so it sounds like a telephone. But, if I ever get a sound editor I'm guessing I can apply the same technique, so thanks any way. -AAA

drspin98 (27th Oct 2005 14:42)

I liked the shot with the shadow on the tree and the back of the kid's head as he crept up on the fellow with the weapon. The kid with the knife needs to act "tougher". At no time did he act threatening or forceful. Tennis shoes do not look very menacing. Nice job keeping your finger off the trigger of the weapon before shooting (*take note Arktic). All and all pretty good, I liked it. The shots seem pretty well thought out.