Sollthar (20th Oct 2005 15:01)

Finally a stargate fan film that looks decent. There's a couple of things wrong yet, wich has almost everything already been said, but apart from that, it does look quite cool. Good cinematography as far as I can tell. The editing needs to be a lot quicker though, there's shot's in it that are simply too long and/or not saying anything (for example the girls face in close up... er?) Looking forward to see it.

JMarcusXavier (10th Sep 2005 17:13)

It looks interesting, it definitely has promise. But the sound balance is out of whack. The music is great and sets the mood very well, but it overwhelms the dialogue in some places. You should try separating out the dialogue into a raw WAV file and then run it through a few noise filters to screen out that background hiss, that'll make it clearer and let you raise the voice levels so they don’t get drowned out by the choir aah's.

nfsbuff (5th Sep 2005 08:09)

We've been doing extensive work on the muzzle-flashes for the final teaser. The mud explosion unfortunately goes off quad, so its been difficult finding the balance between the feather amount and the edge. Thanks for your input, every bit of critiquing is a big help.